2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量，注意几处拼写错误；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

Recently, many people pay attention to cerating a campus. This phenomenon has become a hot topic . You can see this embarrassing situation that some people throw paper everywhere and attach less important to environmental campus . It's of vital important to creat a green campus. Many people think green campus means green environment .this view is not right.Green campus not only represent environment,but aslo shows polite and moral. As a college student, we should strengten the ties environmental sence and social polite. In order to creat a green campus , we should appeal citizens to carry out. Those who should remind ourself every time .What's more, if we want to have a brilliant future, we ought to put emphasis on our behaviour.