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China's water resources are seriously lacking. Now, China life is getting better and better, a lot of people do not save water. Many factories pour waste water directly into the water. So now we have to protect the water resources. First of all, should have the awareness of water conservation. Then, the government should crack down on environmental factory. We should plant more trees Protect environment.