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5．可适当增加细节，使内容连贯。信的开头已为你写好。词数：100左右。
Dear Mr. Smith ,
I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my school and school life .
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；可将文中的简单句转换为长句或者复杂句；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段。
Dear Mr. Smith , I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my school and school life . Our school was founded in 1990, there are 48 classes, 280 teachers, 3200 students. The teaching building can have more than 60 classes. There are more than 200 thoudend books in our library; four language classroom. I am a high 4 classes. My major class are: Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry, computer. I am good at English and computer. I like listening to music very much, especially like to listen to Taylor swift and Lorde. I also like swimming.
