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December 30, 1999, Tuesday John Denver, a famous American country music singer, is giving his singing performances at the People’s Theater this week. I was lucky to get a ticket and heard him this evening. Denver is one of the famous country music singers in America. He has made many records and has traveled to many countries in the word. His songs are often broadcast on the radio and TV. He sang wonderfully this evening. His songs were beautiful. Although I couldn’t understand some of the words in his songs, I could still feel from his songs the beauty of the country. I wish I can hear again.
