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Now,an announcement for a voluntary .In view of the car accidents and deaths caused by drinking driving ,promote responsible driving and urge the local to introduce a designated driver program. We are going to print posters and pamphlets,make banners and signs and send petition letters to the officials of local government. The tasks also include posting posters on streets,distributing the pamphlets among car drivers and mailing the letters to local officials. Any students of this school who are physically energeic about public affairs and socially committed to local road safety and awareness of drunken driving are eligible for the the event.