请作者增加词汇丰富度,希望作者能够较为熟练的使用学术词汇;句式变化较为明显,另外句法层面做的不错;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
If students not think the spelling is important ,What will happened.Now, fewer and fewer students pay attention to their word-spelling. According to this porgrom,there is a increase in the number of students who can only read the pronunciation of a word but be not of spelling it. One of the most common factors is that fewer and fewer students need to write English essays. Besides,the goal of most students to learn English is to speak it and pass the examination which means they just need to select the similar words according to the listening materials and passages. I argue that we need to attach great importance to word-spelling. To the students,they should write English as much as they can