2002年1月英语四级作文真题:就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信

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Dear Mr. President, 　　I am a student in our university. I am writing this letter to you to show about the food that we eat every day 　　Firstly, we feel we need more foods served to the students, which means every student can get the food that he thinks suitable for his taste and his pocked, Secondly. A student from a class that ends at noon may reach the canteen .However, the fact is that the canteen is closed when he gets there. Thirdly, we are greatly concerned with the dining environment. We feel that student diners are entitled to a better dining environment than what they are having . 　　We do hope that the canteen will do more better. 　　 　 Yours Li Ming