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5．可适当增加细节，使内容连贯。信的开头已为你写好。词数：100左右。
Dear Mr. Smith ,
I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my school and school life .
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误；多多注意文中错误的句子；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
Dear Mr.Smith, I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my school and school life. My school has long history. It was built in 1990. First of all, there are 48 teaching classes, 280 good teachers and 3200 students in my school. Secondly the teaching buildings have more than 60 classes and our libiary has 200000 books at less. Thirdly, our science building certains many Phycic lab., Chemcial lab. and even four sound lab.... I studyed inthe class 4. Everyday, I should learn Chinese, Math, English,Phycic, Chemcial and computer. I am fond of them, especially English and computer. So, I am good in them, too. Of crouse, I have other hobbies, such as listening music which is popular, swimming and skating... I am forward to getting your letter. Yours sincerely, Li Hua
