2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(111):演唱会

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December 30, 1999, Tuesday, Sunny. I had a wonderful day! This week, John Denver, who was the most famouse countryside singer from Amerca, held his singing performance in the People's Theat. You can not imagine how lucky I was, to my surprise, I bought one ticket, so I went to his singing performance tonight. Do you know Denver well? He came out many records and he sang in many countries. You can always hear his songs in redio and TV. Denver sang wonderfully! His sangs hear so nice that make me confortable. Athough there were many words I could not understand entirly, I felt the place, I saw the beauty of the countryside. I can not forget it, I love him!