小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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When I was at the age of 7, a boy named Zhan, came into my life, and definitely, he is my best friend now. He is a charming guy, because every time when I go party with him, he is always surrounded by many girls. Besides, he is a really wealthy man. Last time when I talked to him, he said he could earn 10,000 yuan each year, which is a rather consideration amount. Consequently, he enjoys quite a luxurious life, he wears clothes of famous brands like Nike and Adidas, and he drives marvelous car like Lamborghini. In addition, he likes playing football, without a doubt, he is dexterous, and as a result, he can deliver incisive passes and his dribbling is magnificent, which makes him break through the defense easily and get countless fabulous goals.