小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；作者句法基本功不错，可适当增加从句的使用；拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用。

When I was at the age of 7, a boy named Zhan, came into my life, and definitely, he is my best friend now. To begin with, I would like to say, he is a charming guy, because every time when I go party with him, he is always surrounded by many girls. Besides, he is a really wealthy man. Last time when I talked to him, he said he could earn 10,000 yuan each year, which is rather a considerable amount. Consequently, he enjoys quite a luxurious life, he wears clothes of famous brands like Nike and Adidas, and he drives luxury cars like Lamborghini. In addition, he likes playing football, without a doubt, he is dexterous, and as a result, he can deliver incisive passes and his dribbling is magnificent, which makes him break through the defense easily and score countless goals.