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Name is the name of the novel "million pounds", the writer is Mark Twain, this story tells the story of an American poor boy Henry Adams in London's adventure. A London two rich bet, lent Henry, a cheque cannot deliver millions watching him how it ended in a month. To a month, Henry didn't starve to death or arrested, but became a millionaire and won the love of a beautiful young lady, novel style hand for humor, irony, this novel is worth we take a look.
