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2013年山东英语中考模拟试卷英语作文:写邮件

发布时间:2013-05-15 17:34浏览次数:582
要求:
假如你叫张霖,暑假后就要进入高中(senior middle school)学习。由于住校 (live at school) 与住在家里各有利弊,你想通过e-mail征求英国笔友Bill的意见。内容应包括住宿、饮食、交通等几个方面。

注意:

1、字数要控制在100词左右。

2、不要出现你的真实姓名。
3、开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总数。
Dear Bill,
    How is everything going? Something is troubling me very much. So I’m writing to ask for your advice.

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It’s so hard for me to make a decision. I’ll be very glad if you could give me some suggestions.

Please write back soon.
Yours
Zhang Lin

用户的作文(系统评分60.0分
评语:

作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳;请注意分段。

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Summer holidays after.I am going to senior middle school.Because I live school or home both have advantages and disadvantages.I want to chat with you. At home,I can often look after my parents.But it can't at school.At home I have my own bed.So I can get up late.At the school I must to share room with lots of students.And the food is very dreadful.The person often says'There are many bug'But I stay at home I have many delicious food.At home I may not be convenient in traffic.Late I think it is a waste of time. Nonetheless at the school I can make more friends.Dear Bill What should I choose?

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