山东临沂市临沭县2012-2013学年高二下学期模拟试卷英语作文

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Dear John: Thanks you invited me to your home eat dinner . I am sorry to I can't come .Beacuse I am busy starting to my text the after tomorrow . The text is very important for me .My parents also realise this text importance .I think you can forgive me this time. I hope you have a good time .I am looking forward to receiving your letter soon. From Li Hua