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Attention, please. I will tell you something important. Christmas day is coming, so we planed to hold an English party in the meeting hall. First at all, you should remember that the party will begain at seven o'clock and end at ten o'clock. Please don't be late. Secondly, everyone should praper yourselves' performance, two or four are enough. Then, remember it's your own show time, so you can give us all kinds of performance what you like, for example, singing English songs, puting on English stories, telling English jokes or stories, reading are all ok. In the end, welcome to our party, you will have a wonderful time!
