2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(104):澳大利亚行

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达，但要多积累学术词汇；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用。

Dear Mr and Mrs John, How is you getting on with everything? I have aready arrived in Bejing safely. It was the first time that I had went aboard to Australia. When I left home, I was pretty nervous, but when I get the airport as soon as I saw you were waiting me, I was warm entirely. Jenny, a very pretty girl, not only took me to many places which were famous and beautiful, but also told me the stories about those places. What she did left me the best memory, I was thankful. If you were free, please come to Bejing, so that I can return you kindness like you gave me. I am forward to your coming. Best wishes. Yours, Li Ming.