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Dear editor, I am Lili. As time went by, there are more and more cars. In the one hand, it can go around quickly and easily without too much time, so it is good for us. When we were traveling in the cars, we would not only be comfortable, but also be much more safe than by bicycle. However, in the other hand, the number of cars is getting more and more huge. It is a problem, because the too many cars cause traffic jams and so much accident. What's more? Our environment is getting worse and worse because of the pollution which come from cars. In my opinion, we should contry the number of cars, so that we can have a clean and quiet life.
