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词汇表达较灵活准确，学术词汇使用过少，另外注意文中个别的拼写错误；可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
Dear Sir/Madam, Greetings from China! I am Li Hua from sichuan. I have been a panda lover since I was a little boy. Luckly, I found your website by chance. Three years ago, I saw the panda named Baiyun birth a handsome little panda baby named Sulin. However, as soon as I saw her, I fell in love with the lovely baby. Now, Sulin is going be be three years old, I am exciting about it! Send my best wishes to her! On the other hand, her heath can't leave your careness, so thank you very much, you are so kindness! By the way, can I get the photo of three years old Sulin? If you do it, I'll be very gratefull. Yours truly, Li Hua.
