2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；建议适当增加些复杂句的使用；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

As we all know,the phenomena of shopping online become prevailing in our society.We buy beautiful cloths,telephone,almost everything in our life,through internet. There are several of causes of shopping online.Firstly,there are so many lazy people who want to buy thing without leave home.In addition,something online is cheaper than shop.What's more,you can find more goods than shop so that you can find what you like best. In my point of view,every coin have two sides,shopping online is not exception.More customs are cheat by shopping online.Besides,you may find the cloths does fit you after buying it online. As far as I am concerned,we should think more about the thing which you want to buy online