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假如你是李明，你的美国朋友Smith先生将到你所在的城市工作，希望你为他找一处合适的房子。你正好看到一个房子出租广告。请按照下面的要点给他发个电子邮件，告诉他房子的情况。
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文章词汇表达比较灵活，学术词汇的使用要继续加强；文中有几处错误的句子，部分句子偏简单；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
Dear Smith, I am very glad to hear that you would come to work here. You asked me to find a flat for you and now I’ve found one, which I think might suit you. I recommend the house is in the business district.The house is on the eighth floor of the building.There are two bedrooms and a hall, a kitchen and a bathroom.You only pay 2000 dollars。Around here not only convenient shopping and traffic is very convenient.So I think it is very well。 Please let me know whether you like it or not. Yours, Li Ming
