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高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

发布时间:2013-05-16 16:20浏览次数:22875
要求:
某英文杂志新设“我的家乡”专栏向读者征文,请按下面提供的要点写一篇100个词左右的短文,介绍你的家乡过去的情况和现在的变化,向该杂志投稿。短文标题已给出。
过去:家乡小镇绿树环抱;小河清清鱼儿嬉戏;房屋简陋 街道狭窄;人们劳作生活清贫;现在:高楼大厦厂店林立;大小车辆驰骋街头;工业发展环境恶化;树木减少鱼儿消失;治理污染当务之急。
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;全文结构较为严谨;句式变化较丰富,若注意文中个别句子错误会更棒;请注意分段。

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