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2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(12):学习压力

发布时间:2013-07-12 16:44浏览次数:1068[网页划词已开启]
要求:

假如你是李明,你的班里来了一位英国交换生Paul。他在和你的交谈中表示在中国学习压力很大。请你给他写封信,给他提一些建议。


【写作内容】
1.将自己的问题告诉老师和同学,请求得到他们的帮助。
2.不要总想着考试成绩,要多想想自己在哪些方面进步了,这样就会给自己自信。

3.多做运动,运动可以帮助自己缓解压力,并且有助于睡眠。


【写作要求】

用五句话表达全部的内容,并组成一篇连贯的短文。(信的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入句数);


【评分标准】

句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。


Dear Paul,
I quite sympathize with you and understand the great trouble you are suffering from. …
 
……
Best wishes!
用户的作文(系统评分68.5分
评语:

作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用学术词汇;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。

用户练习作文:

Dear Paul, I quite sympathize with you and understand the great trouble you are suffering from. To be honest, the pressure that we have is really too much, but you should learn how to deal with it. For example, if I were you, I would have a talk with teachers and classmate. I would tell them what problem I have and how bad I feel, so that they can understand you were in trouble, and give help and encourage that you need to you. On the other hand, you are not supposed to remember the exam every time, you should have a relax and realize what progress you have made. It's sure that would improve your confidence and give you powr to make more. By the way, you can do exercise as much as possible. Why? Because though exercise, you will stressed out. What't more? It is also good for sleep! I hope you will be happier and make more progress! Best wishes!

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