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2009全国中考英语试题汇编试题(33)写作:Less Pressure, Better Life

发布时间:2013-09-16 17:46浏览次数:569
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许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力,为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题,你们班特意开展了一次以 “Less Pressure, Better Life”为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法,与同学分享,

内容包括:

●同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么;
●我的压力是什么;
●我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。

注意:

文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。

词数80~100;短文的开头已给出(不计入总词数)。


Less Pressure, Better Life
Hello, boys and girls!
 Pressure is a serious problem in today's world. Students in our class are under too much pressure.  
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  That's all. Thank you!
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Less Pressure, Better Life Hello, boys and girls! Pressure is a serious problem in today's world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. For example, some students cannot get along well with other classmates, some tenagers are ofen argue with their parents, some are worring their homework or exam the whole day. I also have pressure. It was homework. Teachers ofen left too much homework to us, and some were very difficute. I did homework more slowly than others, so I had to spend much time to solve one afer another questions. It really made me feel tired and I started hating studing. Then, I decided to have a rest by listening some music which are slow and quiet. In the end, I did homework much more quickly than ever before. That's all. Thank you!

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