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I'm very glad that I have a good chance to find a way to study better. There will be a lecture about the use of computer in our school on June 14th. The lecture will begin at nine o'clock in the meeting room. Professor Zhang Ling, who is from the Computer Department of Beijinmg University, will give the talk. She will teach us how to use computer and how to use the Internet to study. At last, she will leave us some time to ask questions. I happen to have some problems about this. For example,I don't know how to get information for my homework on the Internet. So I decide to take part in the lecture. I will ask her the questions and I hope to get the best answers I want. And I hope it'll be helpful to my studies.