2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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now,online shopping is become a new fashion.people have belong hisself camputer .so anything is come on.people are two factors contributing to this attitude for online shopping. in the one hand ,online shopping is give our convenient ,give our a large number option.in the other hand,online shopping is very danger ,because online don't have law .so if your are cheat in the online ,nothing could prodect your power, however ,but our still like online shopping.