高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用，文章会更棒；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

My hometown is in Chongqing.The people here are mostly fruit farmers。Some of them work in the rice cooker industry. It is also one of the largest and most developed county in GuangDong. Chongqing is a traditional agricultural county. Home town surrounded by trees, clear creek fish frolic, house shabby streets are narrow, poor people living labor, Now: tall factory stores everywhere. Although our house here is not very big, but it is very comfortable to live in and I love my hometown very much.