2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；很好的运用了从句，但部分句子稍有瑕疵；文章结构严谨，有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分；请注意分段。

There is something provoking and interesting in this, just because sword does not wear the stone as dripping water does. The ability to do something over and over again in a short time may imply its easiness, but in a long run, a lifetime maybe, things turn out to be quite the opposite. Also, as is often the case, one may have obtained all the tools and opportunities to achieve something So how could we avoid the dilemma? Here is the prime condition of success. Concentrate you energy, thought on the business in which you are engaged, hang on in there and be patient, for, as Emerson put it, no one can cheat you out of your success but yourself.