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Dear Georqe: Good day It was nice to receiving from you ,your letter recently mentioned that you want to know more about those household hotels in my hometown , the details are as follow : price : CNY30 each for single room CNY20 each for double room table money: CNY20 each day You can each lunch with the host family or order dishes in the menu.you can also make dishes by your self . you may take part in the activities like sea-water bathing、 mountaineering 、unpaid greenhouse laboring if you like . That's all i know about the household hotels in my hometown and i wish you would have a nice summer vocation in my hometown. best regards Yours Lihua