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There is a Traffic Accident happened when I am studying at home.A week ago I saw a traffic accident. It was at about 9:00 on Saturday morning, June 15th, when I went out of the university to visit a friend of mine at another university. Two taxis crashed together. It was a traffic accident. I went up and found that the two taxis were badly damaged. One door of a car was knocked off and lying on the road. One driver was bleeding and another was shut in the taxi. Some people were trying to help the driver get out of the damaged car. One man was calling the traffic policeman station. A lot of cars were jammed on the road. From the stopping track on the road, it is clear that the two taxis were driving too fast. But it is just one of the reasons.
