作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,学术词汇使用稍显不足;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
As we know, English has already become an international language now. It is often used in the world. However, some students find it hard to master it. Let me show how. Firstly, make up your mind to learn English well and never give it up. Secondly, it is an effective way to read the text aloud in the morning and try to remember the important words, phrases and patterns. Thirdly, it is suggested that you should finish all the homework on time by yourself. When you come across some problems, turn to your teacher or classmates for help. Don't be afraid of making mistakes. As you know,more prograss make you more succeed.