2005年12月24日英语四级作文真题:名校校园旅游

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For this part .One can always find visitors taking pictures . During the May Day Holiday,National Day Holiday,summer and winter vacations,many University campuses become popular tourist sites. In my opinion,university campus should be open to tourists. In fact,there are many gardens and parks.Why do you think people prefer visiting here with their children. That is because it is a dream goal for many Chinese parents and young ambitious students. Besides this,as more tourists come to visit universities,these universities can widen their influence as well and they can also make some profit from the tourism.