小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Mary is my best friend,she very betiful.She is a good friend to me,and important to me.We like to study,sing,paly game togeter.I like her smile to me,just like flower in the sunshine.Mary usully teach me sings,she singer very good.sometimes we're fight,but soon nice us.Mary's English very good,she say her want to travel.