邢台二中2012―2013学年上学期高二年级期末测试试卷英语作文

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School is students' secoung home.How to improve the school safety School safety is a matter of great importance. Firstly, nobody should be allowed to enter the school without permission. The school guard should check everyone entering the school strictly. Besides, the school security guards should walk around the campus from time to time so that some bad people can be frightened away. More importantly, school safety education should be offered by the school. Students can be taught what to do when faced with danger by himself or herself. As for us students, we should keep safety in mind whatever we do. We shouldn't trust strangers or give away our personal information to them.