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This is an exciting day,this week the famous American country music singer John Denver concert held at the People's Theatre (singing performance), i am very lucky, buy a ticket, went to hear him singing tonight. Denver is America's most famous music singer, a lot of albums he sang in many countries around the world. His songs often played on the radio and televisions. Denver sings great. His songs are beautiful, very natural. Although some of the lyrics I do not understand, but I can still feel the beautiful countryside from his song. I will always remember this concert! December 10, 1993, Saturday, sunny.