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Through humorous and sarcastic language, Mark Twain successfully depicted a fortuitous adventure of Henry Adams, a poor American lad in London. Two rich men in London had a bet on him and wanted to see what would become of him a month later if they gave him a million pound banknote which couldn't be cashed. A month later, Henry wasn't starved nor arrested, but became a millionaire. What's more, he even won the love of a pretty lady. This is a brief introduction to the story.
