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拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
Friends bring us warmth, support and strength, so that we feel better life. In the journey of life, friends, mixed with our peers, friendship and light our way of life. Life, what a beautiful youth will be like water, like gone, only the sincere friendship between the friends will not wither, can last forever. So I would say: "My friends, I really cherish the friendship of it!" Friendship misunderstanding: Together violation of school discipline, such as bullying others, along with smoking and drinking, harboring classmates errors. Correct concept of friendship: love collective, help each other and progress together. Cherish the friendship cherished friend!
