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Not too long ago，I was once broken.At that time，I tried my best but i don't succeed.I got what I want but not what I need.I felt so tired but I can't sleep.And the tears came streaming down my face.I've already lost something I can't replace，for instance，a heart for aggressiveness，courage，dreams and so on.Could it be worse？ But fortunately，my best friend lent me a hand and helped me out in time.He found me standing alone in a pouring rain.He came up to me，said with warm smiles：“Shit happens.Do not let them put your fire out.Lights will guide you home，and ignites your bones，and I will try to cheer you up.But if you never try you'll never know，just what you're worth.” Now I've got over it，thank you sincerely，my friend.I promise I will learn from all my mistakes，and try to be a better and stronger man.
