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作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；结构不严谨，几乎没有使用衔接词，上下文衔接欠流畅；请注意分段。
Recently, our school has done a survey of students' English reading situation, but the results are not pleasing. On the one hand, the students aren't very interested in reading. And they can find little time to read, because they have too much homework. On the other hand, they can't read in the right ways. Besides, there are not enough suitable materials for them to read. In my opinion, we are supposed to spend more time in reading. We need to practice reading every day. As for teachers, I hope they can give less homework. What's more, they had better teach us how to read and provide more suitable materials for us.
