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2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(110):英语日记

发布时间:2014-01-08 17:58浏览次数:414
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请根据下问题是,写一篇英语日记
  4月20号,星期二。天气晴朗。你在家里做完作业后,决定去电影院看电影。正要到电影院的时候,你突然发现一位外国人,站在路边非常焦急。于是,你走上器拿去问出了什么事。可彼此都听不懂对方说的话。最后,你们依靠身势语才知道对发个意思。原来这位外国人士想去人民公园。于是你叫了辆出租车,并告诉司机他要到哪里。然后,你就去了电影院。
  要求:1、各是正确,文章通顺。2、词数:100左右。
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作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构;请注意分段。

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  April 20, 2004 Tuesday Fine    I've finished my homework so that I made a decision to see a firm.On my way to the cinema,I happened to find a foreigner standing by a road and he looked very anxious.I didn't know what's his matter but I did want to lend him a hand.So I came up to him,asked what's wrong with him.However,unfortunately it seemed that he just couldn't understand me.He also said something but I couldn't get his point either.Finally we had the ability to understand what others are saying by using body language.He wanted to go to Renmin Park.Whereupon,I hailed a taxi for him and told the driver where to go.He thanked me sincerely.Then,I continued my way to cinema and felt good.

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