雅思写作范文:城市交通问题

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One hundred thirty million people in our country,so you can imagine the condition of traffic in the large city of China.We usually spent more than one hours on the way to go to work,because we must througe two or three traffic lights every crossing.If someone ask me about the reason,I aways insist my opinion.It's absolutly not be doubted that the number's increasing of car's.