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In the UK, only 15 years old of above senior high school students to work in their spare time, part-time job is not more than three hours a day, not later than 7 o 'clock in the evening, 18 hours a week. In the work, can get some life skills, such as the guidance, to deal with the interview and getting along with people, confidence and independence, to learn how to financial management, good learning and improve the work sense of responsibility, I think this way is very good, can help us to grow.