2008年高考英语作文真题附范文(四川卷):保护环境

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但学术词汇稍显不足；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。

Everyone can do something for our environment.As for me，every tiny thing has able to make the land where we live better.I keep turning off the lights before I leave classroom，taking an active part in Earth Hour as well. In normal times，I’m using different ways to reach the low-carbon economic.So far，I’ve planted over 3,000 trees around the city. When I go shopping，I use cloth bags instead of plastic bags. What's more，I use paper both sides.It's a good habit to protect forrest.There are a lot of trees that are cut down every year and made into paper.We use paper to write and draw，this is the same as using trees！