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上周，我们以“谁是你的偶像”为题，在2600名学生中进行了一次调查(survey)。以下是调查数据：
有效地采用了多种衔接方法，层次清晰；注意下文中出现的句法错误；文中用词稍显贫乏；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用。
Last week,we did a survey among 2,600 students on the"who is your idol"The survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as idols,while 48% of the boys figure sports stars . As the data shows,"parents"ranks the second for the girls,but the for the boys. However,the percentage of the boys choosing "great figures"is the same as that of the girls. As for myself,Miroslave Klose is my idol because he has handsome appearance and unparalleled football skills，he gives me the power to go on as well.
