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5．可适当增加细节，使内容连贯。信的开头已为你写好。词数：100左右。
Dear Mr. Smith ,
I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my school and school life .
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
学术词汇表达比较恰当，仍需注意积累词汇量；句子错误偏多，建议修改；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。
My school was built in 1990, the school has 48 classes, teachers 280 people, students have about 3200 people, the building can accommodate more than 60 classes, the library collection of more than 20 volumes, science and technology museum has many physical and chemical laboratory, four speech classroom. I study in high (4) classes, my main courses are Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry, computer, good at English and computer, likes listening to pop music, swimming and skating.
