行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;句法知识不错,多多加强复杂句的练习;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误。
Dear penpal, I'm very glad to know that you will go to China with your parents and spend Mid-Autumn Day here. Mid-Autumn Day is a traditional festival which have a long history in China.People will stay together and have dinner together on that day.After dinner,we will go out of the house to enjoy the bringht moon,as well as eat mooncakes.So it's a very importan festival for Chinese people. At last,I wish your family will have a great travel. Yours, Li Hua