2009全国中考英语试题汇编试题(55)写作:雾霾天气（haze weather)

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Recently，the haze weather has happened to many cities in the north of China．it brings so much convinient that people are very upset about this. First, people can not see the road clearly. So it is very dangerous for people to drive and causes some traffic accident. second, it makes the air terrible.In some place ,people even can't breath smoothly because the air is poisonous that it can causes many deaseses. Last, even the plants can not grow well and they may die if the bad weather lasts too long. What can people do to prevent this bad things? I think we should protect our enviroment all the time, put less poison into air .Build less factories and less tall buildings.Instead we should plant more trees ,more grasses and never pollute the air.I believe the world will be better in the future.