2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(41):乘公交车与骑自行车

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They are going to school by bus and going to school by bicycle. Each of them has its own advantages. On one hand, going to school by bus can save you a lot of time especially when you live far away from your house. Besides, it can also save some energyand you won't be very tired when you get to school. On the other hand, going to school by bicycle can provide you with a chance to make you stronger and healthier. As we know, cycling is a good form of exercise. What's more, cycling is a convenient form. choosing which way to go to school depends on the personal favour and house's place. I think going to school by bicycle is suitable for me because it exercise my body.