3、从该人物身上得到的启示。
文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
William Shakespeare born in Great Britain.He's a writer whose writing skills are excellent.However,before he became a writer,he had done various jobs,which made him up a lot of social experience.As a result of that,he was actually a talented man full of imagination. I admire Shakespeare a lot because of his great influence to the world.He was one of the world's most eminent astronomer.He had 38 plays,155 sonnets and so on. He wrote plays and poems that are read all over the world, I like him because his comedies and tragedies bring me into a fantastic world; I love him because his poems let me enjoy the beauty of the English language! Since “Life is a stage”, we are actually all actors and actresses. On this stage, everyone had his own role to play. and I will try my best to play my role well.