2009年专四作文真题:旅游对环境的影响

从句数量稍显不足，注意增加从句和复杂句的使用；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；文中能较好的使用一些学术词汇，不过拼写错误比较多；可以适当增加副词的使用。

Everything has two sides.It is the same to tourism,on the one hand,tourism play an important role in the development of our ecomy.In some way,it is true that tourism bring harm to the enviroment. In my sense,there are two reasons.The one is tourists,the other is agency of goverment. For most of tourists, the sense of protecting enviroment is out of their mind,all of them enjoy in the scenery and ignore what their behavior to the enviroment.The another is goverment agency.In order to earn more money and increace fiscal revenue,some of the goverment destoy the original ecological to develop new toueism. Blindly persuit the economic growth and lack of awareness is the reason of harm for the enviroment.