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句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；作者学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间，词汇表达灵活性也要提高，单词拼写错误较多；可以适当增加副词的使用。
Everything has two sides.The same as tourism.On the one hand,tourism play an important role in the development of our eco.In some way,it is true that tourism bring harm to the enviroment. In my sense,there are two reasons.The one is tourists,the other is agency of government. For most of the tourist, the sense of protecting enviroment is out of their mind,all of them enjoy in the scenery and ignore what their behavior to the enviroment.The another is government agency.In order to earn more money and increase fiscal revenue,some of the government destoy the original ecological to develop new toueism. Blindly persuit the economic growth and lack of awareness is the reason of harm for the enviroment.
